An Ode for Peach
"Tsomp, tsomp..."
Because you are so yummy,
I love to eat you so much
On the beach, you peach!
The bright sunlight
makes me to laugh out loud.
I'm so glad
That I could munch
On you so much.
Whenever I eat you!
You make me jump
Around and around
Delicious peach!
You are so yummy,
You makes me
To eat you until
Bright night
When the moonlight is riding
High up in the sky.
Yeonjoo,
ReplyDeleteGood ode! Your syllables rhymed and they made sense. A bit more variety in your vocabulary use would have made it more effective.